P5

I am going to make my format better, improve grammer issues and make it a shooting script.

Max has said that i need to make jack's into bigger and better. if i was going todo this again i would make it a bigger more dramatic entrance to show his is important and that his character has a big entrance for a reason and to show he is the main character. this is because the audience may get more of a feeling about him as a character from the entrance.

I need to make sure that names areaways included within the script because there were few inconsistencies within my script to do with names. tis will help the actors to know exactly what they are doing and when.

My grammar and punctuation has got a bit lost within trying to make the script perfect. I need to make sure that i don't loose important ways to work things so that the basics are there before anything else. The is important otherwise it may confuse people more. I am going to make sure that allsentances have got a full stop and that they don't have to much crazy punctuation overexagerated stuff within it.

I also need to make sure that i can complete a script and not write what we are seeing because it should be shown ons screen anyway. this was my way o making sure i knew what was being described and what wasn't but i ned to get rid of this after publishing and/or fining it. It needs to be completed in the correct ways and this is one of the faults within my script.
I definitely agree with all of these points and i think that changing and manipulating these things in the right waybill make my script ,more successful and work better to read and act from. If it was being used in real life it would be more difficult f i didn't change the things for everyone else even if i can understand it.